Saturday, July 5, 2008

Haikus as packing peanuts

Beauteous

She’s walking softly
in the reeds, parting for her.
A beauteous dance.

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The mirror, she lies.
You think it’s a compliment.
Nope. Just adjectives.

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A two-fer on the same subject! This one came about while Tod and I, starved for attention, tackled the same haiku theme for the same price. Two for one! It's like happy hour at the Vending Machine! And it makes excellent filler here until Tod's lappy gets mended.

2 comments:

Speakeasy, that's who. said...

That is eerie. I remember tackling haikus together but I don't remember doing these specific ones. Stupid sunstroke.

Paul said...

Therefore only I know whose is whose! Muhahaha!

Man this blog really brings out the evil laughter in me.